woah. HOT. especially that part about Sam's wondering finger.. x)

I also liked the whole awkwardess and what Dean was going through in his mind, noticing Sam's looks and trying to keep things non-awkward between them. It really brought out Dean's character well, because we all know he loves his brother so much that he would do anything for him. Even ignore his awkward stalking so he wouldn't feel bad. :)

Very nice work for a first S/D fic indeed :)