fic question

[gothic_elvis]

Hey guys I got a quick question for ya'll: I have an idea for a femmeslash fic but I'm not entirely sure what I should use in terms of vocab regarding their vajayjays. I mean, I really dislike the word pussy - no idea why, don't ask me - but I will use it if I have to. And I don't mind the word cunt in regards to it but I know some women take offense to that. I know there's always just clit or opening or entrance but the last two make me think of the ass so...I dunno lol
If you were reading a het/femmeslash fic what words would you like to see/not take offense to?

Comments

[websofseaweed.livejournal.com]

i write a lot of femslash porn (SHH, NO HATIN' LOL) and i generally use cunt when referring to the vaginal opening and clit when referring to the clitoris. another good tactic is not using any names for the actual anatomy and just referencing the person by name - e.g. 'mary sue slid her fingers into brittany' or 'jenny clenched roughly around the dildo as she came'. if you want to check it out, i just finished up a buffy/faith for femslash_today and posted it here (http://community.livejournal.com/femslash_today/291881.html?thread=2740265#t2740265).

words to avoid: vagina, pussy (it really takes me out of the fic and makes me go 'eww'), overly pulpy words like sheath, flower of her virginity, etc., and super blunt words like fuckhole. lol.

anyway, that's just how i do it. it's not the only way. :p hope i helped!

[gothic-elvis.livejournal.com]

I WON'T BE HATIN'; I THINK THAT'S AWESOME!

Thank you for the tips though! It really, really helps. I think my best bet is just going with not using any names or whatever though I may generally use cunt, cause like I said, it doesn't really bug me. [God knows why pussy does but the 'c word' doesn't.]

Yeah...ewwwwww I hate it when they refer to it as 'flower' of any sort and just, no. Just no.